We have all seen or heard the commercials that are
uncomfortable, awkward, and obviously lack natural conversation skills. That is, most definitely, what you want to
avoid as an advertising professional. As
in most things, the best way to figure out what works for video scripts and
what doesn’t, is simply to consider the competition. In this case, maybe not the work of direct
competitors, but rather just the body of videos and commercials that you come
across.
Make a List As you watch and listen, write down what you like
and what you don’t. You’ll be amazed at
how clearly you can define what you want from your script by doing this.
Consider Everyday Conversation If you would not converse on
this topic, and, more importantly, your customer wouldn’t converse on this
topic in the course of a normal day, then chances are it will come across as
awkward in the video. So, you might have
to change your approach, creating a monologue, as opposed to trying to pass it
off as normal dialogue. If it is a
discussed, topic, then really consider how it is discussed. In what setting? Using what sort of language and by whom? If you can write a script that is very
closely based to real life interaction, then you will be far more successful
with it.
Hire a Professional Am I biased? Of course I am. I work in the voiceover industry and I have
the utmost faith that I can create a more believable voice for the dialog than
the untrained individual can. However,
to take it one step further, you really should avoid using friends and family
members for the voice acting in your video.
Just as people can be camera shy, they can be microphone shy, which can
cause them to alter the tone, tempo, and inflection of their speech, resulting
in an awkward form of speech that is far from convincing. This is exactly why we see and hear so many
‘awkward’ commercials. Avoid the
discomfort and allocate some money for professional voice services.